Clover Madison

I actually didn't feel that the beginning was that slow. I was actually drawn in by the beginning. Your description was very good. I could clearly get a sense of ...

This was a really good story, I loved the description of the Japanese Garden. You described Andersons perfectly. I wanted to know more about Beth, maybe what she looked like, ...

From what you wrote it sounds like you need to write - I'd say go for writing. Just because the words don't flow onto the page doesn't mean your not ...

Wow I really like this poem! I love your initial description of the girl, esp: her body radiated to all around. The imagery was very well done. I stood taut ...

lol. Yeah that's kind of how I felt after having to read " Ode On a Grecian Urn ." (I do really like Keats tho just not that poem in ...

Jane Eyre was a great read. I thought it was very good. As a classic I thought it would be hard to read but I could relate very well to ...

I love Dahl's work especially Revolting Rhymes (If your ever in the Children's section of a bookstore you must check it out its hilarious). His short stories are amazing. I've ...

Ah, just wait until you finish Grapes of Wrath. I hated Steinbeck for a while then started reading Grapes of Wrath and thought 'okay he's not that bad.' Oh but ...

You may have already fixed these mistakes but here's what I found: At the end of the first paragraph you refer to JKR as Joanne Rowling to keep consistency only ...

Me and Ben had just gotten out of a long fight about his relationship with Lynzie. This should really be Ben and I. Sorry but this is a huge pet ...

Wow! I thought that was a very good start, very intense. You did a good job of drawing the reader in right away. I especially liked the rhyme at the ...

I really liked the style that you wrote this poem in. The interchanging short lines, long lines was very neat. I'm sure if I've seen that used before but I ...

Some Grammar Stuff First: They carried to paperwork from office to office. He had a large pile of papers in his hands. “ Ken, don’t be gone too long, this ...

This is a very good poem. I like your word choices in the first three or so lines especially. Hard, cold and hold all work really well together and their ...

I liked this story. I thought the ending was really cute. It made me smile. There were a few parts that stuck out though while I was reading it. He ...